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One year ago, I suffered from flu and fever. It was not a big deal. I just gave my appliction for two days in college and decided to take rest at home without knowing what was going to happen with me. I reached home told my mum about my sickness. She asked me to take rest and after some time she brought glass of milk and biscuits for me. I took them. She asked me to take medicines which were in medcal box. I told her I was no more a child I would take them on time. After some time I opened medical box and took the medicine without any care if I was taking the right one. Two more hours passed but I did not feel any improvement in my condition rather I felt pain in my stomach which was increasing as time was passing. I slept for some time. When I woke up I was not  well. With flu and fever there was severe pain in my stomach which was spreading in whole abdomen. I could not understand what was happening to me. At night, I again took the same medicine.  In morning, the condition was same. With flu and fever now I was suffereing great pain in abdomen. I was surprised. My mum asked me about my health. I did not tell her anything and keeping continue taking the same medicine. The whole day was so uncomfortable. I decided to consult a doctor but it was a big task for me because I did not have power to go to him. That day passed. At night I slept. As I remembered it was mid of night when I got up because of pain in  my stomach. I felt dizzines and room was spinning rapidly. As time was passing, pain was increasing at the point came where it cannot be tolerated. I told my mum and she took me to doctor. Doctor asked some questions.I told him everything. He asked me the name of medicine that I had been taking. As I told him the name he started laughing. His laughter amazed us. Mum asked him reason of lughing. Then he told with smile on his face that I had been taking the medicine of pain in back bone. As there was not pain in my back bone it did not affect but its side effect was pain in stomach. Then I remembered my father had backache and he used to take medicine but he never had more than one in a day. Then I got what was happening to me and why. Doctor strictly forbade me from self medication. Mum scolded me harshly. At that time I was feeling so bad but after some days when I got well, we enjoyed my this foolishness.  Even today my family members made fun of me remembering me that incident.

You went a tea shop with your younger sister who is just 4. After few minutes you saw she was not there. What were your feelings at that time? How did you find her? What lesson did you get from that incident?

My younger sister has always been attached to me. Wherever I go, she always insists to go with me. Same thing happened that day, my friends and I were having some gathering in a nearby tea shop, and while I was leaving my little sister Abiha, who’s only 4 years old, entreated to go with me. I agreed on taking her with myself. We went there, had greetings with my friends. Abiha was playing with some children in the shop. After an hour when we were about to go home, I searched 
for Abiha but she wasn’t anywhere. I shouted calling her name, but she didn’t give
any response.

I didn’t know what to do. I was crying. I was in the state of complete desperation. I searched everywhere, in the shop, outside the shop, in nearby shops, but I couldn’t find her. Suddenly, my friend showed the CCTV cameras. I talked to the owner of shop. And requested him to allow me to watch the CCTV videos.
After watching every video, and inspecting them carefully, I found that Abiha
was under a table in the shop. When I looked under the table, I found her sleeping, hugging her teddy bear tightly. She was looking so innocent. I woke her up and took her home.
That day I learned a lesson “never to be careless”. That day I promised myself
that I’ll always be careful. And that I’ll take care of her.

Q: You went to a tea shop with your younger sister who is just4. After few minutes you saw she was not there. What were you feeling at that time? How did you find her? What lesson did you get from that incident?

It was the sunny and pleasant morning of Sunday. Everything seemed to be charming. School was off so I decided to go out for tea to get some recreation. I asked my younger sister to come and she agreed. I took my bike out garage and asked my sister to sit on back. We traveled half an hour and then we reached Taj Tea Shop. We entered the hotel and I pointed a chair to my sister and told him to sit there. I went to buy some cakes from tuck shop and to order tea.    When after few minutes I came back I was astonished to see that my sister was not on her chair. For once everything seemed standstill to me. It started goose-pimples on my skin. I started to search her in every nook and corner for the tea shop. I asked each and every person present there but everyone refused to see her. I went outside and started asking people about her but everyone's reply was no. I was unable to decide what I should do now. Headache started in my head. My heart was beating like jungle. My whole body was trembling. Sweat was pouring rapidly from my face. I was so depressed and crestfallen.  Despair was battering my bastions of courage and hope.     I was crestfallen and was thinking that it is only my shortcoming that I left her alone even after knowing that she is just 4. I was very helpless praying and looking for some miracle. Suddenly a middle aged man having turban on his head clicked my shoulder from back. He asked me has your sister lost? I eagerly replied yes! A ray of hope stirred within me when he asked me to follow him. I was following him and he took me to the mosque. When I entered in the mosque. My sisterly crying ran towards me shouting brother. She hugged me very hardly like we're meeting after years. She was crying and saying brother please don't leave me alone. I missed you very much. I felt fearful without you. She was talking to me but I was in dreams. I thought I have got a new life. Again everything started to look charming in front of me. I was feeling like the happiest person in the world. I thanked and said good bye to who brought me to my sister who was actually a pupil of Mosque's Imam. From this life changing incident I got two lessons. First we must be very conscious and careful about children's care. Second the world is still full of great people and Humanity is still alive. 

When you worked really hard to get something?

        It is said that hard work is key to success. One cannot succeed in anything without hard work and struggle. Everyone in life works really hard to get what you actually want. I have also worked hard to be a good football player. I always wanted to be the best player in my football team. I always wanted to play football on district and province level.

     It was the June of 2009.We were busy in playing football, suddenly a man named Sami Baloch (Official member of DFA) shouted,” Hey! Guys come here.” We stopped our play and went to him. He asked who wants to become a big football player. Everyone shouted me! Me! He continued if you really want to become a big football player than I’ll arrange a match for you. Anyone who scores more number of goals or gives outstanding performance he would get a chance for representing District Football Association (DFA)’s Team. Like other players I was just stunned after hearing this. It was the dream I ever aimed for. I knew this is big opportunity to change my dream into reality.

    I made my determination that I have to make my selection in DFA’s team. I started working so much hard, I had never did before. I made my routine eat, sleep and football. I took 7 days leave from my school. I started to get up early in the morning and went to ground for practicing. Daily I practiced free-kicks, penalty kicks, and dribbling there. I often practiced my skills in backyard of my home at night. I didn’t wanted to keep football away from feet for a second. I continuously practiced for 6-7 at stretches. Till 7 days I didn’t change my football kits and shoes thinking that this is waste of time. I was so busy with football that many of my friends, even family members, thought I have become mad. But it didn’t stopped me from working hard and continued playing with my ball as much as I could.

      Then the day came which made me to cut off my real life. It was match day. I was curious and excited for the match. At last after a long wait opponent team arrived with Sami Baloch. And then the match started. In the very first minutes I succeeded in marking up my name goal scorers list. I was working very hard and playing so much good to impress a Sami Baloch. After a half time when match continued, just after few minutes my team mate Sana Ullah scored a goal.  For once I thought I’ve lost the opportunity of changing my dream into reality. But in the last minutes of game fortunately I again got the ball and was running quickly towards the opponent’s goal post. Sana Ullah was also running with me. When I reached opponents goal past there were only two men, a goal keeper and Sana Ullah. I easily dodged the goal keeper. Now there were only empty nets, Sana Ullah and me. If I scored, I would have been selected in DFA’s team. But I just passed the ball to him. He looked unbelievingly towards me and just tapped the ball to goal post.

       He got selection in DFA’s team. That was the last match I played. After match he asked me why I did so. I answered you’re better than me. You’ve really worked than me. You can become good football player as compared to me. You really deserved it more than me or other player of our team. Many players said to me Ibrahim you deserved it more, you really worked hard than him. I replied,” May be I deserved it but yeah I really worked very hard. Passing ball to him was very tough and hard. It was like one killing one’s own life but I did it and I’m proud of it.”

[Now Sana Ullah is the main and best striker of Baloch Football Club Noshki playing in Pakistan Premier League.]

Last evening you had flu and fever. You were weak and nervous because of that bad condition. Took dose of wrong medicine. What happened next? How did you get to your normal condition? What effects this medicine had on you?

Last evening all my family members had gone to my cousin’s marriage. But I couldn’t go because I had bad flu and fever. I was feeling very sick. I was coughing constantly. My body was continuously shivering due to illness. I was so weak and nervous that I couldn’t even speak.

    I was very crest fallen and depressed. I was just unmindful and oblivious. I scrambled off to medicine room to take some medicine. Just after taking dose of medicine I was shocked because I had taken wrong dose of medicine. At the same, the medicine started its side effects. My consciousness increased. My head started to ache just like someone battering it with iron axe. Everything in front of my eyes blurred. Before I was only coughing now it started vomiting. I was very confused and overwhelmed when saw I’m vomiting blood. I knew I’m doomed. What happened to me after that I don’t know because my eyes had blacked out.

    When I opened my eyes, I was in hospital. Many pipes were attached to my body. Doctor was telling my father that it all happened of taking wrong medicine. But now your child is out of danger you can take him to home.

   I thanked God that I’m alive. I felt very sorry on my mistake because it could be a life taking. After taking medicines for a month I came back to my original and healthy state. That medicine has still some effects on my health. I often feel sleepy and unconscious due to it.