Showing posts with label essay writing skills. Show all posts
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Thursday, March 23, 2017

Q: You had a flue and fever last week. You were weak and nervous because of that bad condition, you took a dose of a wrong medicine. What happened next? How did you come to your normal condition? What effects that medicine had on you?


Last week we had gone for a picnic on the beach with all my family members. The weather was a bit cold that day. After coming back from the picnic I had a high fever and flue. I didn’t take it seriously. I thought I’ll be okay within a day. But next day when I woke up, I felt like I was near to die. I had 102 fever. I was unable to talk.I took the first aid box and searched for any tablet. I found 2 tablets that I thought it might be the tablets of fever and flue. I took that. After an hour my condition got worst. I was dizzied. I was unable to move. I stood up to reach out somebody, but I fell down.After few hours when I opened my eyes, I found myself lying on the bed in hospital. The doctor told me that I had taken the wrong medicines. After some treatments the doctor gave some new medicines
and discharged me from hospital. And advised me never to take any medicine without a proper treatment. Since that day I never took any medicine without concerning.........

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        One day I was suffering from fever and the temperature was high my condition was not good .My mother took me to doctor and he gave me medicine and advised me to take with milk .we came back to home and then some guests came in my house and my mother got busy in their hospitality and forget about me. I was lying in the bed and nobody was near me. My condition was very bad. I was feeling weakness and I didn’t any thing and l saw a envelope of medicine on my side table I thought it is my medicine so I took it and after 15 minutes my condition was unbearable and
red small pimples appeared and on my skin .I was feeling dizzying then my mother came and she was in worry and tension when she saw me in that situation then she took me to hospital and doctor checked me completely and told my mother that she took wrong medicine that effected her. Then mother remembered her mistake and said that this all happened due to my negligence so thank God I got normal and we went to home.

Nick Vujick



Nick vujicic was born to dushka and Boris vujicic in 1982 in Melbourne, Australia.
Although he was an otherwise healthy baby, nick was born without arms and
legs, he had no legs, but two small feet, one of which had two toes. Initially, a
Victoria state law prevented Nick from attending a mainstream school due to his
physical disability inspire of a lack of mental impairment . However ,vujicic
became one of the first physically disabled students integrated into a mainstream
school once those laws changed. However, his lack of limbs made him a target for
school bullies, and he fell into a severe depression. At age eight, he contemplated
suicide and even tried to drown himself in his bathtub at age ten; his love for his
parents prevented him from following through. He also stated in his music video.”
something More” that God had a plan for his life and he could not bring himself to
drown to because of this.Nick prayed very hard that God would give him arms and legs and initially told

God that, if his prayer remained unanswered, Nick would not praise him
indefinitely. However, a key turning point in his faith came when his mother
showed him a newspaper article about a man dealing with a severe disability.
Vujicic realized he wasn’t unique in his struggles and began to embrace his lack of
limbs. After this, Nick realized his accomplishments could inspire others and
became grateful for life. l feel very proud when I see the passionating person.
God has gifted every person with talent and art .We should be thankful to God
that he has provided us all the body parts. Life teaches us a great lesson.
Sometime we get lesson from other person life. We should support a person who
has different skills and talent but due to some problems they cannot express their
talent and their skills become rusted. We should respect such kind of person and
treat them equally without any discrimination. We should give opportunity to
such kind of person so that they can expose their hidden talent and survive in
society and earn a livelihood without depending on others. This man gave the
message of courage, hope, firmness and will power. The main thing is that if our
mind is working no one can kill our creation and abilities so always hope for the
best

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I had habit of going for tea in the nearby teashop before going to college. one day I was getting ready for college and my younger sister wake up and she said that she wants to go with me for tea.I refused her but she insisted me that she wants to go and after that she started crying loudly .I can’t see tears in her eyes then I agreed and she was very excited at that time she got ready and we went for a tea shop. She was very happy and I didn’t see that smile on her face before that. I asked her if she wanted to eat something. She said that she wants to eat muffins then I said OK sit here l am going to order muffins for you. She said ok. Then when I returned back she was not there. I was shocked at that time. I got nervous and I searched here and there but I didn’t find her. I was worst experience of my life and I can’t forget it then suddenly I saw that she was playing with a baby then I relaxed and asked her why she came here .she replied that baby was weeping so I came here then I said OK and next time don’t go anywhere without telling me. Then she ate muffins and in this incident I felt my mistake that I should not left her alone because she is little and didn’t understand the ups and downs of life. I am very thankful to God for

keeping her safe otherwise I can never forgive my self. Then we
returned home.

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One year ago, I suffered from flu and fever. It was not a big deal. I just gave my appliction for two days in college and decided to take rest at home without knowing what was going to happen with me. I reached home told my mum about my sickness. She asked me to take rest and after some time she brought glass of milk and biscuits for me. I took them. She asked me to take medicines which were in medcal box. I told her I was no more a child I would take them on time. After some time I opened medical box and took the medicine without any care if I was taking the right one. Two more hours passed but I did not feel any improvement in my condition rather I felt pain in my stomach which was increasing as time was passing. I slept for some time. When I woke up I was not  well. With flu and fever there was severe pain in my stomach which was spreading in whole abdomen. I could not understand what was happening to me. At night, I again took the same medicine.  In morning, the condition was same. With flu and fever now I was suffereing great pain in abdomen. I was surprised. My mum asked me about my health. I did not tell her anything and keeping continue taking the same medicine. The whole day was so uncomfortable. I decided to consult a doctor but it was a big task for me because I did not have power to go to him. That day passed. At night I slept. As I remembered it was mid of night when I got up because of pain in  my stomach. I felt dizzines and room was spinning rapidly. As time was passing, pain was increasing at the point came where it cannot be tolerated. I told my mum and she took me to doctor. Doctor asked some questions.I told him everything. He asked me the name of medicine that I had been taking. As I told him the name he started laughing. His laughter amazed us. Mum asked him reason of lughing. Then he told with smile on his face that I had been taking the medicine of pain in back bone. As there was not pain in my back bone it did not affect but its side effect was pain in stomach. Then I remembered my father had backache and he used to take medicine but he never had more than one in a day. Then I got what was happening to me and why. Doctor strictly forbade me from self medication. Mum scolded me harshly. At that time I was feeling so bad but after some days when I got well, we enjoyed my this foolishness.  Even today my family members made fun of me remembering me that incident.

Thursday, March 9, 2017

You went a tea shop with your younger sister who is just 4. After few minutes you saw she was not there. What were your feelings at that time? How did you find her? What lesson did you get from that incident?



My younger sister has always been attached to me. Wherever I go, she always insists to go with me. Same thing happened that day, my friends and I were having some gathering in a nearby tea shop, and while I was leaving my little sister Abiha, who’s only 4 years old, entreated to go with me. I agreed on taking her with myself. We went there, had greetings with my friends. Abiha was playing with some children in the shop. After an hour when we were about to go home, I searched 
for Abiha but she wasn’t anywhere. I shouted calling her name, but she didn’t give
any response.

I didn’t know what to do. I was crying. I was in the state of complete desperation. I searched everywhere, in the shop, outside the shop, in nearby shops, but I couldn’t find her. Suddenly, my friend showed the CCTV cameras. I talked to the owner of shop. And requested him to allow me to watch the CCTV videos.
After watching every video, and inspecting them carefully, I found that Abiha
was under a table in the shop. When I looked under the table, I found her sleeping, hugging her teddy bear tightly. She was looking so innocent. I woke her up and took her home.
That day I learned a lesson “never to be careless”. That day I promised myself
that I’ll always be careful. And that I’ll take care of her.

Thursday, December 8, 2016

When you worked really hard to get something?

        It is said that hard work is key to success. One cannot succeed in anything without hard work and struggle. Everyone in life works really hard to get what you actually want. I have also worked hard to be a good football player. I always wanted to be the best player in my football team. I always wanted to play football on district and province level.
     It was the June of 2009.We were busy in playing football, suddenly a man named Sami Baloch (Official member of DFA) shouted,” Hey! Guys come here.” We stopped our play and went to him. He asked who wants to become a big football player. Everyone shouted me! Me! He continued if you really want to become a big football player than I’ll arrange a match for you. Anyone who scores more number of goals or gives outstanding performance he would get a chance for representing District Football Association (DFA)’s Team. Like other players I was just stunned after hearing this. It was the dream I ever aimed for. I knew this is big opportunity to change my dream into reality.
    I made my determination that I have to make my selection in DFA’s team. I started working so much hard, I had never did before. I made my routine eat, sleep and football. I took 7 days leave from my school. I started to get up early in the morning and went to ground for practicing. Daily I practiced free-kicks, penalty kicks, and dribbling there. I often practiced my skills in backyard of my home at night. I didn’t wanted to keep football away from feet for a second. I continuously practiced for 6-7 at stretches. Till 7 days I didn’t change my football kits and shoes thinking that this is waste of time. I was so busy with football that many of my friends, even family members, thought I have become mad. But it didn’t stopped me from working hard and continued playing with my ball as much as I could.
      Then the day came which made me to cut off my real life. It was match day. I was curious and excited for the match. At last after a long wait opponent team arrived with Sami Baloch. And then the match started. In the very first minutes I succeeded in marking up my name goal scorers list. I was working very hard and playing so much good to impress a Sami Baloch. After a half time when match continued, just after few minutes my team mate Sana Ullah scored a goal.  For once I thought I’ve lost the opportunity of changing my dream into reality. But in the last minutes of game fortunately I again got the ball and was running quickly towards the opponent’s goal post. Sana Ullah was also running with me. When I reached opponents goal past there were only two men, a goal keeper and Sana Ullah. I easily dodged the goal keeper. Now there were only empty nets, Sana Ullah and me. If I scored, I would have been selected in DFA’s team. But I just passed the ball to him. He looked unbelievingly towards me and just tapped the ball to goal post.
       He got selection in DFA’s team. That was the last match I played. After match he asked me why I did so. I answered you’re better than me. You’ve really worked than me. You can become good football player as compared to me. You really deserved it more than me or other player of our team. Many players said to me Ibrahim you deserved it more, you really worked hard than him. I replied,” May be I deserved it but yeah I really worked very hard. Passing ball to him was very tough and hard. It was like one killing one’s own life but I did it and I’m proud of it.”


[Now Sana Ullah is the main and best striker of Baloch Football Club Noshki playing in Pakistan Premier League.]

Last evening you had flu and fever. You were weak and nervous because of that bad condition. Took dose of wrong medicine. What happened next? How did you get to your normal condition? What effects this medicine had on you?

Last evening all my family members had gone to my cousin’s marriage. But I couldn’t go because I had bad flu and fever. I was feeling very sick. I was coughing constantly. My body was continuously shivering due to illness. I was so weak and nervous that I couldn’t even speak.
    I was very crest fallen and depressed. I was just unmindful and oblivious. I scrambled off to medicine room to take some medicine. Just after taking dose of medicine I was shocked because I had taken wrong dose of medicine. At the same, the medicine started its side effects. My consciousness increased. My head started to ache just like someone battering it with iron axe. Everything in front of my eyes blurred. Before I was only coughing now it started vomiting. I was very confused and overwhelmed when saw I’m vomiting blood. I knew I’m doomed. What happened to me after that I don’t know because my eyes had blacked out.
    When I opened my eyes, I was in hospital. Many pipes were attached to my body. Doctor was telling my father that it all happened of taking wrong medicine. But now your child is out of danger you can take him to home.
   I thanked God that I’m alive. I felt very sorry on my mistake because it could be a life taking. After taking medicines for a month I came back to my original and healthy state. That medicine has still some effects on my health. I often feel sleepy and unconscious due to it.


Being lonely!!!!!!!!!!!

Loneliness basically means being alone. But different people mean it differently. Some people claim that being lonely means blessing from God while other people say it means killing yourself. There is type of people who like and love it to be alone. They think that they cannot do anything special unless they are alone. They also claim that when they are alone, their horizons of thinking, creativity, invention of ideas are broadened. They can achieve their goal only when they are alone. For example, William Shakespeare (a famous English poet, story writer, and Novelist) mostly used to remain alone in his life and proved it that being lonely is really a blessing of God. He just changed the world of English literature by working and thinking alone. Similarly, there is another of type of people who just loneliness. According to them, loneliness is more horrible than a fearsome movie. It is main reason for mental disorders like depression. They also insist that Person cannot do a good judgment in every aspect of life when it is alone. They claim that person can get better ideas, creativity powers and fledgling thoughts only when he/she is working in group. By working in group he/she can reach out easily to their problems. In this category of people we have got many examples as well. One them are Wright Brothers who just pioneered the most comfortable mean of transport, Airplane by working in group. They proved that man can do better even it is not alone. From above paragraphs we can conclude that being lonely is relaxation for some people and it is cause of depression for some people too. Therefore, loneliness just depends upon person’s personal interest and mood. It’s obviously a natural habit.